This is only my second tab on here, so be nice...I would appreciate constructive critism. Thanks!

Guitar One Intro
D||-------------------------------------------------||
A||-------------------------------------------------||
F||-------------------------------------------------||
C||-7/1--7-00-8-00-10-00-8-00-5-00-8-00-7-00-5-00-3-||
G||-------------------------------------------------||
C||-------------------------------------------------||
         . .. . .. .. .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . 

D||---------------------------------------------||
A||---------------------------------------------||
F||---------------------------------------------||
C||--7-00-8-00-10-00-8-00-5-00-8-00-7-00-5-00-3-||
G||---------------------------------------------||
C||---------------------------------------------||
     . .. . .. .. .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. .

Guitar 2 Intro
D|-------------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------------|
F|-------------------------------------------|
C|-10-00-12-00-14-00-8-00-12-00-10-00-8-00-7-|
G|-------------------------------------------|
C|-------------------------------------------|
   .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. . .. . 

D|--------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--------9-9-9-------------------------------------------------|
F|--------x-x-x-------------------------------------------------|
C|-8-8-8--7-7-7-----7-00-8-00-10-00-8-00-5-00-8-00-7-00-5-00-3--|
G|-8-8-8--------------------------------------------------------|
C|-8-8-8--------------------------------------------------------|
                    . .. . .. .. .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. .    

D|-----------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--------9--12-12-12----------------------------------------------|
F|--------x--x--x--x-----------------------------------------------|
C|-8-8-8--7--10-10-10--7-00-8-00-10-00-8-00-5-00-8-00-7-00-5-00-3*-|
G|-8-8-8-----------------------------------------------------------|
C|-8-8-8-----------------------------------------------------------|

The rest of the other tab looks ok to me...so there you go